They pointed out that the spray painted cotton balls looked like charcoals or rocks. They also liked how it oozes out of the box. Gives a good illusion. The background has its own illusion because of the way it is put together it seems like it has its own depth of space. The clean cut of the of the newspaper contrasts with the roughness of the squares. They liked how there was texture in the positive space.
They felt that there was too much black so they wanted the border to be gone or smaller. They also wanted to see the cotton to be more shaped into a square.
They saw a lot of variety in my accordion book and liked the neat and clean edges. They also like the fact that it is not falling apart and sticks very well together. They think my choice of background was the best one out of the book because it balances out with the foreground of the piece.
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