Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Critique on Cardboard

I'm making a crab claw that you can wear on your arm. My group was able to tell that just by looking at it and thought it was really cool. They thought it was interesting that it was very geometric, segmented to resemble more of an arm, and shows mobility. The enjoyed the way I connected my piece together on their ends. Apparently, the group said that the piece looks really stylized and functional with its geometric form giving it a kinetic feel. Has a smoothness all around that brings you in to the piece.        

Then they said it was too perfect and needed to be unbalanced and off. That's when I went "whuh?"

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