These were the final two that were chosen. My group liked the way I used the words and they like the way how it compliments the ink mark. They like how the trail of the ink mark starts strong and then spreads out thinner and thinner because it goes well with my quote. They prefer the top one more because the like how the ink mark looks at the bottom of the page than at the top. They wanted the large font to be a little bit lower of the page because it looks like I am trying to force balance instead of it balancing on its own. Also they thought it would be better if the second part of the quote was a little bit smaller and upside down.
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